I did really well on my analysis and synthesis as I explained how the quotes I chose benefited my essay and tied back to my thesis. I could have fixed up comma splices a bit more. I think the number one thing I need to work on, or my complete overhaul, would be my works cited page. It was fine for the Dalai Lama, but my “The Week” article citation was wrong. That would be a goal for me to work on this November.
“That would be a goal for me to work on this November.”
Hmm yes but we won’t need a Works Cited page for this next project. Also, with your major, you’ll likely be using APA a lot–